2008년 10월 24일 금요일

Delta Test2


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To me, my favorite style of dress is casual. First, it is informal. So it has no structure. I can organize my individuality freely. Second, It has very broad range of styles, such as sporty or hiphop. So I can wear many kinds of clothes. Third it is cheaper than traditional or other uniform clothing. As most of them are mass produced and they are often sales in department store.


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To me, I prefer to learn by listening to a teacher. First, I can learn faster than reading a book. To me, the teacher says more words in 30 seconds than I can read. Second, I can involve my socialization. As when I am learning to a teacher, there were many people usually. But in the book, there's no people. Third, I can focus on my study more. As when I am listening to something, I take my notes.


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In the lecture, The man want to do his presentation on web page. First, Steve already knows how to do it, who is in his group. Also, knowing how to build the web page is a good skill to have. This will help him to have a good career in the future. Also, web page has very various tools. So the presentation will be more creative. In addition, his classmate already knows the email how to.


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The lecturer says that there is a conflict between work and family roles. For most women, the work and family is more related as the women has to care the family and work outside. She easily stressed out. But for most men, family is far more important than work for their overall life satisfaction. For example, when he fought with his family and go to the working place, he will fight with his coworkers.


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In the listening passage, the man has to choose witch one to go. The first place is beach and the second place is rainforest. If I were him, I will choose the second one, rainforest that his biology trip. First, If I go to the biology trip, I can get experience and I can have great opportunity. And this will help me to get a good job for my future. If I go to the beach, but going to the beach can do anytime he wants.


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The lecturer says that the human hands are very valuable possession. It is extension of our brain and it is very complex function. First, we have apposable thumb. So we can touch every finger with our thumb. Also we can feel textures with our hands. So this will be the eyes for blind people. Second, we can grab two things in a same time. And we can make tools so we can learn faster with out possessed hands.

댓글 2개:

eLearning :

Christina,

Your overall score is a 2: You're delivery is too hesitant and you need to work on developing your sentences a little faster. Also, your grammar has a few issues. One: you said, "I can organize my individuality freely." It isn't clear what you mean here. Instead you should say, "I can organize and arrange my outfits in a way that lets me express my individuality." Also, you said, "Third it is cheaper than traditional or other uniform clothing. As most of them are mass produced and they are often sales in department store." You don't need to have two sentences here. After the first sentence, you should just add "as" on the end and continue on with the same sentence.

eLearning :

Question 2: Score: 2. Again, you are having issues in getting out what you want to say. Very choppy. Also having issues at the phrasal level as seen when yous said, "Second, I can involve my socialization." It isn't clear what you mean here and you should instead say, "Listening to a teacher is more social way of learning." Again, your next sentence should be a part of the first. "As when I am learning to a teacher, there were many people usually." Like this, "Listening to a teacher is a more social way of learning since when I am learning from a teacher, there are usually many people."